A part of SoP - I really need help This is the first paragraph of my graduate application SoP. I have to descript personal situation, but I am not familiar with this type of writing. If there is anyone can read through and give me some feedback, it would really be appreciated. ------------------------------------------------------- Guessing an algorithm of a system is the way I explore ideas concerning the modern technology environment. I and my husband, a physicist, always discuss how a system is designed and works. When using a navigation app in a car, we talk about navigation systems’ algorithm, like “Why Waze can give better estimation than Google Map, and what causes the difference?”. I consider a possible explanation for a question for the questions, including utilization of input data and optimization algorithms. And I try to evaluate the explanations via web searching or other materials. I think that if I were a developer, it would be grateful to participate in this fascinating field. This interest and motivation toward technologies lead me to apply to your program.