What's your opinion of marriage
When I saw this topic I felt so pressured .A girl needs to marry when she were young in our culture .For my age nearly to thirty years old . I got a lot of flights with my parents on this topic .When I graduated from university I have no idea about what's kind of job I need do .I am confused with life .Most of my friends married after graduation . They always complained with their marriage . Suddenly I feel so scared of marry. In my spare time I would like to go to watch movie alone . I don't want to spend time on dating a guy.When I discussed the reason why my idea is so different . I realized that it's too difficult if you want to find a right person . It seems like everyone is busy with work .No one cares you are happy or not . I insist on be a single in the life .
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What's your opinion of marriage?
When I saw this topic I felt so pressured. A girl needs to marry when she is young in our culture - from around my age to thirty years old . I have been in a lot of fights with my parents on this topic. When I graduated from university I had no idea about what kind of job I needed (wanted?) do. I am (was?) confused with life. Most of my friends got married after graduation. They always complained about their marriage. Suddenly, I feel so scared of getting married. In my spare time I would like to go and watch movies alone. I don't want to spend time on dating a guy. When I discussed the reason why my idea is so different, I realized that it's too difficult if you want to find the right person. It seems like everyone is busy with work. No one cares if you are happy or not . I insist on being single in my life.Notes:
Hello! Be careful with tenses - past simple, present simple, present perfect etc. I wasn't sure about which time period you were speaking about in some of your sentences. Also, you should revise prepositions - from, for, to, with, on etc. If you want, I can give you lessons on these subjects.
Good work, keep it up!
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