Please, Can anyone check this little paragraph for me?? thanks. This is the last paragraph of my motivation letter, although I spent a lot of time writing it, it still seems not quite good, especially the coherence and consistency of the sentence, I sure it will be so much better if you could help me with it, Thanks! Every experience in the real industry, it’s like an exam to test how well I can do, but also teaches me things I haven’t learned and makes me better recognize my weakness. And when it back to school, it is time for me to improve myself. So, I think design is just an adventure about learning and practicing, and this is exactly the reason I choose your program, because you offered realistic and cooperative projects which is the best and brilliant teaching method to me, and you also encourage students to carry out internships when they are at school. I would certainly live and breath as a designer in your university if it is possible, and I will work my way to become a great designer in the future.