New Position
To: Richard Hardin
From: Madeline Kovacs
Subject: New Position
Dear Richard,
We are pleased to inform you of your promotion within our company. Starting the first of next month, you will begin in your new position as manager of the Quality Control Department. During the past year as a member of the Quality Control Department staff, you have made many contributions to the defects diagnosis and raising the quality of the production line. In face of difficulty at work, you've shown dedication to your job as well as flexibility to handle diverse sorts of situations; now we are pleased to recognize your hard work and fine skills with this position. We know you will do a fabulous job. The Personnel Department will contact you soon regarding the changes in your salary and benefits. We look forward to welcoming you to your new position next month.
Sincerely,
Madeline Kovacs
HR Direct
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New Position
To: Richard HardinFrom: Madeline Kovacs
Subject: New Position
Dear Richard,
We are pleased to inform you of your promotion within our company. Starting the first of next month, you will begin in your new position as manager of the Quality Control Department. During the past year as a member of the Quality Control Department staff, you have made many contributions diagnosing defects and raising the quality of the production line. In face of difficulties at work, you've shown dedication to your job as well as flexibility handling diverse situations. Now we are pleased to recognize your hard work and fine skills with this position. We know that you will do a fabulous job. The Personnel Department will contact you soon regarding the changes in your salary and benefits. We look forward to welcoming you to your new position next month.
Sincerely,
Madeline Kovacs
HR Direct
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