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Holidays in Germany. Part 4. The first day If you have a couple of minutes, please, help me to correct my writing. I want to describe one of my vacations in a few notebooks. The previous ones can found here: * Part 1 https://www.italki.com/notebook/5647274/entry/951955 * Part 2 https://www.italki.com/notebook/5647274/entry/953154 * Part 3 https://www.italki.com/notebook/5647274/entry/954140 ==== After arriving at the hotel and checking in, I must find a parking for the car first. As I knew, there were a few public car parkings around. They cost not so much, but the nearest of them is about 30 mins hiking to the hotel so it would be better to park the car somewhere not so far. I asked a receptionist at the desk in the hotel lobby about a parking, and he gave me the advice to look for a free place on the street behind the hotel. I did so and found a vacant place without any problem. After that, I returned to our room where my family was waiting for me. The hotel was not so far from city center. There was still quite a lot of time till the evening, so we decided to walk to the center to look around. In about 30 minutes we were in the pedestrian area of the center. After wandering around the old streets for about 2 hours we were tired and hungry so we directed to the hotel. On the way we spotted a restaurant and decided to get in and had dinner. It turned out it was a restaurant Augustiner Keller, one of the oldest restaurants in Munich. It was a beautiful old building surrounded with a large beer garden, full of people. The evening was warm and dry so we sat down at one of the available tables in the garden. However, this turned out to be a mistake because there were a lot of smoking people around. It was little unexpectedly for us as it was not allowed to smoke in cafes and restaurants in our country. Except this flaw, dinner was great, all the dishes were tasty. Thus, after eating and drinking a beer we went to the hotel to have a rest. Tomorrow, we are driving to Neuschwanstein Castle early in the morning. === To be continued...

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If you have a couple of minutes, please, help me to correct my writing. I want to describe one of my vacations in a few notebooks. The previous ones can found here: * Part 1 https://www.italki.com/notebook/5647274/entry/951955 * Part 2 https://www.italki.com/notebook/5647274/entry/953154 * Part 3 https://www.italki.com/notebook/5647274/entry/954140 ==== After arriving at the hotel and checking in, I must find a parking for the car first. As I knew, there were a few public carparks parkings around. They cost not so much, but the nearest of them is about 30 mins hiking to the hotel so it would be better to park the car somewhere not so far. I asked a receptionist at the desk in the hotel lobby about a parking, and he gave me the advice to look for a free place on the street behind the hotel. I did so and found a vacant place without any problem. After that, I returned to our room where my family was waiting for me. The hotel was not so far from city center. There was still quite a lot of time till the evening, so we decided to walk to the center to look around. In about 30 minutes we were in the pedestrian area of the center. After wandering around the old streets for about 2 hours we were tired and hungry so we directed to the hotel. On the way we spotted a restaurant and decided to get in and had dinner. It turned out it was a restaurant Augustiner Keller, one of the oldest restaurants in Munich. It was a beautiful old building surrounded with a large beer garden, full of people. The evening was warm and dry so we sat down at one of the available tables in the garden. However, this turned out to be a mistake because there were a lot of smoking people around. It was a little unexpectedly unexpected for us as it was we are not allowed to smoke in cafes and restaurants in our country. Except Besides this flaw, dinner was great, all the dishes were tasty. Thus, after eating and drinking a beer we went to the hotel to have a rest. Tomorrow, we are driving to Neuschwanstein Castle early in the morning. === To be continued...

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