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An answer to Anna's email Dear Anna, I hope you had a great day today. I have tried to get back to you by phone but it seems that you are out of the office so I decided to write to you an email. First of all, I wanted to thank you for the time you spent yesterday discussing and giving ideas about the advantages of choosing option 3 as our company logo. I truly believe that all of us make a great team and can achieve the best working together. Unfortunately, I have not changed my mind and still believe Option 3 could not be the most appropriate for our firm. We really need to work on the design and try to make it more realistic and casual in order to catch the attention of our customers. I hope we can discuss our ideas together tomorrow at the office and try to get to a mutual agreement. Thank you again for your work on this and hope to see you tomorrow. Best regards.

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An answer to Anna's email

Dear Anna,
I hope you had a great day today. I have tried to get back to you by phone (this is correct but could simplify by saying "...tried to call you...")  but it seems that you are out of the office so I decided to write to you an email.
First of all, I wanted to thank you for the time you spent yesterday discussing and giving ideas about the advantages of choosing option 3 as our company logo. I truly believe that all of us make a great team and we can achieve the best working together.
Unfortunately, I have not changed my mind and still believe Option 3 could (instead of "could" a more polite form to use is "may") not be the most appropriate for our firm. We really need to work on the design and try to make it more realistic and casual in order to catch the attention of our customers.
I hope we can discuss our ideas together tomorrow at the office and try to get to a mutual agreement.
Thank you again for your work on this and hope to see you tomorrow.
Best regards.

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