The evening stroll
I and my wife have strolled on the winter snowing city. The weather was very soft, minus 6 degree only. But sometimes blew the wind and we felt the wind blowing through us. But if we has dressed wormer, we would not be freeze. Many people go off past us. Some of them returned home, some of them walked too. Children were playing on the snow slides and throuing snowball to each other. Our stroll was very good.
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The evening stroll
I and my wife have My wife and I strolled on the winter snowing through the city while it was snowing. The weather was very soft mild, only minus 6 degree only. But sometimes blew the wind blew and we felt the wind blowing through us. But If we has had dressed wormer warmer, we would not be freeze freezing. Many people go off past passed us. Some of them returneding home, some of them walked too were also walking. Children were playing on the snow slides and throwing snowballs to each other. Our stroll was very good.Your walk sounds lovely and well written :)
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