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Many Countries Aim to Improve Their Living Standard by Economic Development! Countries all over the world have the goal to increase their living standard, therefore they must improve their economic situation, but those actions brings back some drawbacks such as people who lose some social values. I think that in this huge transformation there are more advantages than disadvantages. The world is changing and some third world countries try to improve their economic state because they want more benefits. As consequence, all the natural environments across all over the world are changing. Factories and farmlands are taking space from the wildlife, and if we watched around us with the best attention we would see that buildings, roads and cars are increasing day after day. In addition, jobs in office or factory are the normality, and few people still work in open air workplace. Everyone is happy with this transformation, but on the other side we can see the loss of social values, people are more rude and impolite each other than they were some years ago. Life is very fast, nobody has patience, and when we wake up in the morning we are already angry and in late too. I think it is almost impossible to understand whether it is better progress or not. Economic development means the best school for our children or some super technological hospital or food for everyone. On the other hand there is jam in the streets that brings sadness and tiredness, and pollution as well. In conclusion, world is changing day after day and people want improve their benefits but there are many drawbacks hide behind this economic development. In my opinion, there is a big advantages above everything that is the increasing of health condition for everyone.

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Many Countries Aim to Improve Their Living Standards through Economic Development!

Countries all over the world have the goal to increase their living standards, therefore they must improve their economic situation, but those actions brings back also bring some drawbacks such as people losing some social values. I think that in this huge transformation there are more advantages than disadvantages.

The world is changing and some third world countries are trying to improve their economic status because they want more benefits. Consequently, all the natural environments across all over the world are changing. Factories and farmlands are taking (away) space from the wildlife, and if we carefully watched around us with the best attention we would see that buildings, roads and cars are increasing day after day. In addition, jobs in office or factory are the normality, while fewer people still work in open air workplace.

Everyone is happy with this transformation, but on the other side we can see the loss of social values, people are more rude and impolite with each other than they used to be some years ago. Life is very fast, nobody has patience, and when we wake up in the morning we are already angry and in late too.

I think it is almost impossible to understand whether it is a better progress or not. Economic development means the best school for our children or some super technological hospital or food for everyone. On the other hand there is jam in the streets that brings sadness and tiredness, and pollution as well.

In conclusion, the world is changing day after day and people want to improve their benefits but there are many hidden drawbacks hide behind this economic development. In my opinion, there are big advantages, above all that is the increase in health condition for everyone.

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