Would you please correct my mistakes? From my diary.
I went to The Tama cemetery in Fuchu last Sunday as November 24th is my mother's death anniversary. It was sunny and warm, so the autumn leaves were very beautiful.
Many people were walking around there who were looking for something with a map. They were various age people who were Japanese as well as foreigners. They came there by sightseeing bus to find big-name person’s graves. The place is famous for having lots of them. Especially, there are many tombs of writers, politicians and Kabuki-actors.
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Would you please correct my mistakes? From my diary.
I went to The Tama Cemetery in Fuchu last Sunday as November 24th is my mother's death anniversary (or: 24th is the Memorial day of my mum). It was sunny and warm, so the autumn leaves were very beautiful.Many people were walking around there who were looking for something with a map. They were in various ages, people who were Japanese as well as foreigners. They came there by sightseeing bus to find big-name person’s graves famous people`s graves. The place is famous for having lots of them, especially, there are many tombs of writers`, politicians` and Kabuki-actors`.
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I went to The Tama cemetery in Fuchu last Sunday because November 24th is my mother's death anniversary. It was sunny and warm, so the autumn leaves were very beautiful. Many people were walking around there who were looking for something with a map. There were people of all ages who were Japanese as well as foreigners. They came there in a sightseeing bus to find famous people's graves. The place is famous for having lots of them. Especially, there are many tombs of writers, politicians and Kabuki-actors.
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