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Performance In The Square When we left the Market, we saw one Mexican male playing musical instruments in a small square. That was a performance of playing South American sounded music using unusual plural instruments. He was putting bells around his ankle and making the sound with his movements. It was a nostalgic sound. The song "El Condor passa" was the perfect sound with the instrument and my sister and I listened to the performance enthusiastically for a while. We heard a crow crowing together all the time. It was as if the crow was singing together. My sister put some money in the bag of the male with other customers because his performance was so good.

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Performance In The Square

When we left the Market, we saw one  a Mexican male man playing musical instruments in a small square. That was a performance of playing South American soundeding music using unusual plural instruments. He was putting  (was he attaching the bells while playing hte music?) had bells around his ankle and making the sound with his movements. It was a nostalgic sound. The song "El Condor passa" was the perfect sound with the instrument and my sister and I listened to the performance enthusiastically for a while. We heard a crow crowing with him together all the time. It was as if the crow was singing along together. My sister and some other customers (it's usually more clear if all the people doing the same action are in the same part of the sentence) put some money in the bag of the male with other customers because his performance was so good.

This sounds like a lovely day!

one: Use 'one' if you want to emphasis the numbers.  "There was one man singing and two women playing guitars."

male: this sounds very scientific.  "The male mosquito is smaller than the female."

playing:  this idea is also in the word 'performance'  and 'using' so we don't need it.

ed/ing adjectives: This one can be confusing, but here are many websites like BBC Learning English which can help explain it.

together: When we mention two or more people/groups doing something, with all of them before the verb.  "The children play together very nicely." "He plays very gently with his baby brother."  If you look in the Oxford, Webster, or Cambridge online dictionaries, you'll see many example sentences.

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