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Durian love ( please make my text more natural) Do you believe in love with first sight? I believe and not. Some things win our hearts instantly, some things fight for our hearts. So that was my relationship with durian. Many foreign people here even don’t want to try it. They don’t like the smell. Yes, it’s strong, it stinks actually. I wouldn’t try it if not my chinese roommate. He treats me once. I tried and I didn’t like it. It was really like taste of fried onion in my mouth. And consistency was creamy like melted butter. I do not like mature fruits generally. And I said : No. Its not my fruit. Next day my roommate treated me again. I said I didn’t want it but he put it on my hands and has gone. I ate it, and found out new notes in this taste, actually many incompatible things. I discovered vanilla, cocoa, chocolate and ONION notes. OMG. I said : now 100% no, too extravagant taste. It was nothing about love for the first time, but I didn’t consider it disgusting neither. In one month it turned out that I felt I have a desire, the strong appetite to eat durian. I felt I needed this fruit with its distinctive odor and nothing can replace it :) Fantastic?? So far I consider myself durian lover. It’s curious because nobody is indifferent to durian. There are only haters and fans. I am absolute fan. P.S: never leave it in a small room with closed door. Its distinctive odor is so penetrating that you can smell it even through the husk, let alone its pulp.

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Durian love ( please make my text more natural)

Do you believe in love at first sight? I believe it to be true only sometimes. Some things win our hearts instantly, while others fight for our hearts. Such was my relationship with the durian. Many foreign people here don't even want to try it. They don’t like the smell. Yes, it’s strong, it stinks actually. I wouldn’t have tried it if not for my chinese roommate. He had me try some once. I tried it and I didn’t like it. It was really like taste of fried onion in my mouth. And the consistency was creamy like melted butter. I do not like mature fruits in general. And so I said : No. Its not my fruit. Next day my roommate treated me to durian again. I said that I didn’t want it but he left it in my hands and was gone. I ate it, and this time discovered new notes in this taste and actually many incompatible things also. I discovered vanilla, cocoa, chocolate and ONION notes! OMG, I said : now 100% no, the taste was too extravagant. It was nothing like love at first sight, but I didn’t consider it disgusting either. In one month I discovered that I had a desire, a strong craving to eat durian. I felt I needed this fruit with it's distinctive odor and nothing could replace it. :) Fantastic?? So far I consider myself a durian lover. It’s curious since noone is indifferent to the taste of durian. There are only haters and fans. I am an absolute fan. P.S: never leave it in a small room with closed doors. It's distinctive odor is so penetrating that you can smell it even through the husk, let alone its pulp.
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Hi, I helped you a bit with your English flow and grammar. They say in Thailand about the durian: "Tastes like heaven, smells like hell" :D
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