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Hi there, could you please help check the spelling in paragraph below? Thank you very much! Warehouse team is responsible for receiving all component parts, gas, lubricants, and packing materials from suppliers. They distribute component parts, gas and lubricant to production department and get finished goods. Then they issue it and packing materials to packing team for packing and receive complete goods to deliver to costumers or logistic team for export. In the peak season, Tet holiday, we often were overworked. We couldn't deliver all parts on time. Few our customers were angry. As a team leader, I called to explain for them the reason we missed deadline because of traffic jam and too many orders come in short time. And I asked them give us a little more times. After that, I requested my team worked overtime and completed all order to deliver for customers in early next morning. I was there to support my team and treated them a late dinner after finishing work. In the end, our customers saw our hard-working and they had sympathy for us. My biggest professional achievement is no serious complain from our customers and my colleagues in eight during I worked at previous company. I had award for outstanding personnel in 2016. I already left my job but they still keep in touch with me and care about me.

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Hi there, could you please help check the spelling in paragraph below? Thank you very much!

The Warehouse team is responsible for receiving all component parts, gas, lubricants, and packing materials from suppliers. They distribute component parts, gas and lubricant to the production department and get finished goods. Then they issue it and packing materials to the packing team for packing and receive complete goods to deliver to costumers or the logistic team for export.

In the peak season, Tet holiday, we were often overworked. We couldn't deliver all parts on time. A few our customers were angry. As a team leader, I called to explain to them the reason we missed deadline because of traffic jam and too many orders came in at short notice. I then asked them give us a little more time. After that, I requested my team to work overtime and complete all orders so that we could deliver to the customers early the next morning. I was there to support my team and treated them to a late dinner after finishing work. In the end, our customers saw our hard-working and they had sympathy for us.

My biggest professional achievement is no serious complaint from our customers and my colleagues in eight during I worked at previous company (I am not sure what you are trying to say here but it is not correct). I had an award for outstanding personnel in 2016. I already left my job but they still keep in touch with me and care about me.

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