My hobbies
My hobbies is Draw and singing.When I draw, I live in a very wonderful dream and I go to another world full of beautiful graphics and wonderful colors. Also on a day I feel that the birds sing with me in the wide imagination. It is a beautiful feeling in the imagination because everyone tells me your voice is beautiful in the singing of my sisters. I care about them important I like my voice in singing I love the most foreign singer of the Arab and some people like draw and signs but I like draw a anime cartoon.I hope to like my hobbies
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My hobbies
My hobbies is are drawing and singing.When I draw, I live in a very wonderful dream and I go to another world full of beautiful graphics and wonderful colors. Also on a day During this euphoria I feel that the hear birds sing with me in (the wide imagination) this world I've created. It is a beautiful feeling in the imagination because everyone tells me, "your voice is beautiful" in the singing chorus of my sisters. I care about them important a lot, I like my voice in singing singing voice, I love the most foreign singer of the Arab Arabic singers. and Some people like draw and sing but I like drawing a anime cartoons. I hope to like my hobbiesOverall it was a very nice story and you have a good message. The things I crossed out were replaced do to them having a clearer phrasing that I substituted. But all in all a nice passage :)
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