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i am bored the summer holiday has been ten days,i feel bored very much.every day,surf round and round,or look some no meaning net novels,or listen to some music...i would like to travel some places with beautiful scenery and go shopping with my friends.

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I am bored

The summer holidays have been ten days, I feel bored very much. Every day, surfing round and round, or looking some meaningless net novels, or listening to some music... I would like to travel to some places with beautiful scenery and go shopping with my friends.

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i am bored

the summer holiday has been ten days,

-> It has been ten days since the summer holiday.

i feel bored very much.every day,surf round and round,or look some no meaning net novels,or listen to some music.

-> I feel so bored . Everyday I surf round and round, look for some meaningless novel from the net, or listen to music.

 

..i would like to travel some places with beautiful scenery and go shopping with my friends.

-> I would like to travel to different places with beautiful sceneries and go shopping with my friends.

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