Writing about renting a flat

Dear Robin,
As far as I know about the area, it’s quite a calm place to stay on holidays. In case you are made  mad about monuments, visiting the famous ‘Huge Black Cat Statue’ is a great opportunity to know more about the local fauna. You can try going to the ‘White Sand Beach’ where you can feel fresh air and hot sand, besides contemplating the wonderful views of the bay.
If you adore Italian food, there are plenty of restaurants that give you a lot of variety of pasta, like macaroni, spaghetti, noodles and so on. Moreover, if you are willing to taste fabulous traditional Chinese plates, it’s your chance! The only frustrating thing is that the restaurants are a little bit far from the flat, therefore bringing the bike would be a brilliant idea. Anyway, it’s pretty easy to use public transport because there are many bus routes. But remember, if you are going to visit landmarks on your own, coming at the beginning of August wouldn’t make up for you because traffic jams are very usual.

Writing about renting a flat

Dear Robin,
As far as I know, about the area, it’s is quite a calm quiet place to stay on for holidays. In case If you are made about monuments, visiting the famous ‘Huge Black Cat Statue’ is a great opportunity to know more about the local fauna. You can try going to the ‘White Sand Beach’ where you can feel fresh air and hot sand, besides whilst/as well as contemplating the wonderful views of the bay.
If you adore Italian food, there are plenty of restaurants that give offer you a lot of variety of pasta, like macaroni, spaghetti, noodles and so on. Moreover, if you are willing to taste fabulous traditional Chinese plates, it’s this is your chance! The only frustrating thing is that the restaurants are a little bit far from the flat, therefore bringing the (renting a? Unless Robin has a bike he has suggested bringing) bike would be a brilliant idea. AnywayOtherwise, it’s pretty easy to use public transport because there are many bus routes. But remember, if you are going to visit landmarks on your own, coming at the beginning of August wouldn’t make up be great for you because traffic jams are very usual common. (I don't fully understand the final sentence, sorry!)