My black friday .
Last sunday , i had a wonderful time at one biggest mall in my city. That was the black friday, the biggest sale event of the year . Because i'm on the tight budget , i usually have to save up money and be carefull with my money. I usually wait for these days to seek for the sell offs . As a shopaholics , i can shop until i drop . I dont mind shop around all the day to choose the best things that i really want . I usually choose to go shopping in a mall because there are so many boutiques and high street fashion names , so its more convenient and i can save much time compared to that i have to pull over many stores on the streets . Furthermore, the prices there are quite reasonable with their values . You don't have to worried about how to do the bargain like you have to do when going to the market. I enjoy doing windown shopping too . I never fed up with going to see new styles and try clothes on though i don't buy all of those . Although i listed the must-have products to buy first , sometimes i was attracted to other unnescessary things, which makes me waste my time. The good thing was that i can buy a dress and it is value for money .
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My black Friday .
Last Sunday , I had a wonderful time at one biggest malls in my city. That It was the black Friday, the biggest sales event of the year . Because I'm on the tight budget , I usually have to save up money and be careful with my money. I usually wait for these days to seek out sales for the sell offs . As a shopaholics , I can shopped until I drop . I don't mind shopping around all the day to choose the best things that I really want . I usually choose to go shopping in a mall because there are so many boutiques and high street fashion names , so its more convenient and I can save much more time compared to that i having to go to retail stores in shopping centers pull over to many stores on the streets . Furthermore, the prices there are quite more reasonable with their values . You don't have to worryied about how to do the bargaining like you have to do when going to the market. I enjoy doing windown shopping too . I never fed up I'm never tired of with going to see new styles and try clothes on though I don't always buy all of those them . Although I listed must-have products to buy first , sometimes I'm attracted to other unnecessary things, which makes me waste time. The good thing is that I can buy a dress and for its value for money .0
Last sunday , i had a wonderful time at one of the biggest malls in my city. That was the black friday, the biggest sale event of the year . Because as i'm on the tight budget , i usually have to save up money and be carefull with about my money. I usually wait for these days to seek for the sell offs . As a shopaholics , i can shopped shop until i drop . I dont mind shopping around all the day to choose the best things that i really want . I usually choose to go to shopping in a mall because there are so many boutiques and high street fashion names , so its more convenient and i can save much more time compared to that i have to pull over many stores on the streets . Furthermore, the prices there are quite reasonable there with their values . You don't have to worried worry about how to do the bargain like you have to do when you going go to the market. I enjoy doing windown shopping too . I never fed up with going to see new styles and trying new clothes on though i don't buy all of those . Although i listed list must-have products to buy first , sometimes I'm i get attracted to other unnescessary things, which makes me waste my time. The good thing is that i can buy a dress and its value for money .
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Oh thank you so much . I dont know that I have to use the upper case even in a sentence.
The sentence for my idea is that i have to pull over stores on the streets which are not retail stores in the shopping centers . I think you misunderstand my idea
Anyways , thank you so much for correcting so patienltly!!!!! xD
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I like your writing style, you definitely have personality in your writing. All in all you made little mistakes, I just instead rephrased what you said to make it sound more precise. Also lower case "I" are something a lot of people notice so I went crazy with my highlighting cx hahaha
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