Acupuncture I've tried a acupuncture before. I have received it on my back. A few days later, my back got a lot of small lumps. They were healed by themselves. I think it was failed of the treatment.

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Acupuncture

I've tried receiving acupuncture before. I have received it on my back. A few days later, my back got a lot of small lumps. They were healed by themselves. I think the treatment was a failure. or-- I don't think the treatment worked.

This is pretty good, however some of the sentence structure was slightly off, and two words (red) are not necessary :)

I agree with Justin corrections. But your entry is good, great job you're on the right path :-)

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