Cellular phone - a great invention or a harmful device?
A smartphone. It is the device that we all use. We use it when we need to make a call, send a message or find some information that we need. We can even say that smartphones became the fastest and the most productive secretaries. And yet many people claim that a mobile phone is the most harmful device nowadays. But is it true?
My contention is that smartphones are the irreplaceable assistants and that we just need to learn to use them correctly. To begin with, a phone is one of the means of communication. It helps to stay in touch with people that are far away from us. There are many applications that offer voice and video calls for free. Furthermore, telephones are very compact. They easily fit in our pockets, so that we can take them everywhere we go and use whenever we need. Additionally, modern phones have lots of useful functions. They combine several devices that we use all the time: alarm, camera, flash drive, notebook and so on.
However, more and more people tend to limit the time they spend using a phone. Firstly, they are convinced that smartphones make people less communicative. A common situation: friends sitting next to each other don’t talk but stare at the screens of their phones. Secondly, they believe that electromagnetic radiation cause dizziness, discomfort, nausea, and many other illnesses. And, as a result, damage our brains and bodies.
I cannot agree with this opinion because I think that smartphones make a huge positive impact on human communication. In the past, we were only able to talk with a limited amount of people that surround us. But nowadays we can make new friends from all over the world and talk to them. And as for the radiation, there are no facts that prove this due to the absence of any long-term studies.
To sum up, I would like to say that despite many legitimate reasons for us to be concerned about smartphones, I am convinced that these devices make our lives easier and happier.
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A smartphone is an everyday used device by all categories of people. We use it when we need to make a call, send a message, find a localisation, pay our bills or even find some information online. We can say that smartphones became the fastest and most productive tools, yet many people claim that a mobile phone is the most harmful device to humanity. is it true? And what are the advantages of a mobile phone?
Nowadays smartphones are considered to be the irreplaceable assistants that have so many advantages that should be used the right way. First of all, a phone is one of the easiest fastest means of communication. It provides a lot of applications and services such as paying all of our bills with just one click, checking our bank accounts and staying in touch with people who are far away from us. Furthermore, telephones are very compact, we can use them whenever and wherever we need to because they fit easily in our pockets. Additionally, modern smartphones have lots of useful functions, they combine several devices that we use all the time: alarm, camera, flash drive, notebook and so on... so basically if we're using a smartphone the correct way then we are automatically gaining time. However, more and more people tend to limit the time they spend using a phone. Firstly, they are convinced that smartphones make people less communicative. For example, friends or family members sitting next to each other staring at their phones screens for hours without having a conversations. Secondly, they believe that electromagnetic radiation cause dizziness, discomfort, nausea, and many other illnesses and as a result, it damages our brain and body.
In my opinion, smartphones are making a huge positive impact on human communication. In the past, we were only able to talk with a limited amount of people that surround us. But today we've become closer to those who live far away from us and even we can make new friends from all over the world thanks to smartphone technology. To sum up, I would like to say that despite many legitimate reasons for us to be concerned about smartphones, I am convinced that these devices has made our lives easier and happier.
(Just wanted to use my brain a little bit.. i need correction too.. thank you and good luck)
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Cellular phone - great invention or harmful device?
A smartphone. It is a device that we all use. We use it when we need to make a call, send a message or find some information that we need. We can even say that smartphones have become the fastest and the most productive secretaries. And yet many people claim that the mobile phone is the most harmful device nowadays. Is it true?My contention is that smartphones are irreplaceable assistants and that we just need to learn to use them correctly. To begin with, a phone is one way to communicate. It helps us to stay in touch with those who are far away from us. Many of its applications offer voice and video calls for free. Furthermore, telephones are very compact, easily fitting in our pockets, so that we can take them everywhere we go and use them whenever we need. Additionally, modern phones have lots of useful functions. They combine several utilities that we use all the time: alarm, camera, flash drive, notebook and so on.
However, more and more of us tend to limit our time in the phone. First, we are convinced that smartphones make us less communicative. A common situation: friends sitting next to each other don’t talk but stare at the screens of their phones. Secondly, we believe that electromagnetic radiation causes dizziness, discomfort, nausea, and many other illnesses, and, as a result, damages our brains and bodies.
I cannot agree with this opinion because I think that smartphones are a huge benefit to our communication. In the past, we were only able to talk to those in our vicinity. But nowadays we can make new friends from all over the world and talk to them. And as for the radiation, there are no facts that prove this due to the absence of any long-term studies.
To sum up, I would like to say that despite many legitimate reasons for us to be concerned about smartphones, I am convinced that these devices make our lives easier and happier.
Very well written!
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Cellular phone - a great invention or a harmful device?
A smartphone. It is the device that we all use. We use it when we need to make a call, send a message or find some information that we need. We can even say that smartphones have become the fastest and the most productive secretaries. And yet many people claim that a mobile phone is the most harmful device nowadays. But is it true?My contention is that smartphones are the irreplaceable assistants and that we just need to learn to use them correctly. To begin with, a phone is one of the (or one of the + superlative e.g. one of the best)means of communication. It helps to stay in touch with people that are far away from us. There are many applications that offer voice and video calls for free. Furthermore, telephones are very compact. They easily fit in our pockets, so that we can take them everywhere we go and use whenever we need. Additionally, modern phones have lots of useful functions. They combine several devices that we use all the time: alarm, camera, flash drive, notebook and so on.
However, more and more people tend to limit the time they spend using a phone. Firstly, they are convinced that smartphones make people less communicative. A common situation: friends sitting next to each other don’t talk but stare at the screens of their phones. Secondly, they believe that electromagnetic radiation cause dizziness, discomfort, nausea, and many other illnesses. And, as a result, damage our brains and bodies.
I cannot agree with this opinion because I think that smartphones make a huge positive impact on human communication. In the past, we were only able to talk with a limited amount of people that surround us. But nowadays we can make new friends from all over the world and talk to them. And as for the radiation, there are no facts that prove this due to the absence of any long-term studies.
To sum up, I would like to say that despite many legitimate reasons for us to be concerned about smartphones, I am convinced that these devices make our lives easier and happier.
A well written, accurate essay ;)
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Cellular phone - a great invention or a harmful device?
A smartphone. It is the a device that we all use. We use it when we need to make a call, send a message or find some information that we need. We can even say that smartphones became the fastest and the most productive secretaries. And yet many people claim that a mobile phone is the most harmful device nowadays. But is it true?My contention is that smartphones are the irreplaceable assistants and that we just need to learn to use them correctly. To begin with, a phone is one of the means of communication. It helps to stay in touch with people that are far away from us. There are many applications that offer voice and video calls for free. Furthermore, telephones are very compact. They easily fit in our pockets, so that we can take them everywhere we go and use (them) whenever we need. Additionally, modern phones have lots of useful functions. They combine several devices that we use all the time: alarm, camera, flash drive, notebook and so on.
However, more and more people tend to limit the time they spend using a phone. Firstly, they are convinced that smartphones make people less communicative. A common situation: friends sitting next to each other don’t talk but stare at the screens of their phones. Secondly, they believe that electromagnetic radiation cause dizziness, discomfort, nausea, and many other illnesses. And, as a result, damage our brains and bodies.
I cannot agree with this opinion because I think that smartphones make a huge positive impact on human communication. In the past, we were only able to talk with a limited amount numberof people that surrounded us. But nowadays we can make new friends from all over the world and talk to them. And as for the radiation, there are no facts that prove this due to the absence of any long-term studies.
To sum up, I would like to say that despite many legitimate reasons for us to be concerned about smartphones, I am convinced that these devices make our lives easier and happier.
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I loved it! Keep up the good work! :)
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