An a essay about winter (in English)
Hey there! :)
I just wrote an essay about winter in Persian for my schools homework but then i decided to translate it in to English too. Lol so i'll be glad if someone corrects it and make it more like a literary kind of essay. Cuz i think the Persian version sounds much better than the English one lol
So yeah...someone pls correct it :))
Thnx <3
"Winter"
The sky, says goodbye to the darkness of the night and hugs the morning with its loving arms.
Snowflakes make a carpet on the Earth, this deep sleep of trees make a mysterious silence at the atmosphere.
Everybody look for a change, a revolution, a new season! Yet, no one knows what to do. Of course, life gets tough at times. Especially in winters. This hard and sad situation has made a white hair for the trees. It has made them dream about those good old days, the days when they were young and fresh and green. They are dreaming about their youth, when life was full of flower's laughter not the wilting's cry.
The Earth and the sky are a same color now. And the early birds have calmly leaned against the tree's cold body. It is not about the coldness! Infact, observing this beautiful and splendid scene from this view, gives everyone's body a shiver!
Even the winter's love is different. Not any single warm hug, not even a hot, long lasting kiss...not even a heartwarming touch that reminds you of cozy days with no difficulties. This kind of love awares you and informs you of hardships in life and challenging moments. This love makes us stronger, more patient. As the way they say "good things come to those who wait", you would know that there is going to be a spring after all of this.
In this boring, cold, white world, there is no home for red, green and yellow. As if the painter of this world has left the canvas white and lost his painting-brush somewhere!
But now, the time has come for him to start his art, Again! So he gently paints a shiny sun which happened to be the nature's heart. And with every heartbeat, the heat melts the snow of hardships.
And once again, flowers are smiling...eventually .
"The End"
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"Winter"
The sky farewells the darkness of the night and hugs the morning with loving arms.
Snowflakes pave the Earth, the deep sleep of trees conceives a mysterious silence in the atmosphere.
Everybody looks for change, revolution, a new season! Yet, no one knows what to do. Of course, life gets tough at times. Especially in winter. This unyielding and sorrowful situation bestowed the ever vigorous trees with grey leaves. It has made them dream about those good old days, the days when they were young and fresh and green. They are dreaming about their youth when life was full of blossom's laughter rather than wilting's cry.
The Earth and the sky are the same color now. And the early birds have calmly leaned against the tree's cold carcass. It is not about the frigidness! Infact, observing this beautiful and splendid scene makes the body tremble. Even the winter's fondness is different. Not any single warm hug, not even a blazing, long l kiss...not even a heartwarming touch that reminds you of easeful days with no difficulties. This kind of love unveils the hardships in life and the challenging moments. This love makes us stronger, more patient. It's been said: "good things come to those who wait", you would know that there is going to be a springiness after the twilight.
In this boring, cold, white world, there is no home for red, green and yellow. It seems the painter has left the canvas white and lost his painting-brush somewhere...
But now, the time has come for him to start his art, Again. So he gently paints a shiny sun, mother nature's heart. And with every heartbeat, it melts the snow of hardships.
And once again, flowers are smiling...eventually .
"The End"
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An a essay about winter (in English)
Hey there! :)I just wrote an essay about winter in Persian for my schools homework but then i decided to translate it in to English too. Lol so i'll be glad if someone corrects it and make it more like a literary kind of essay. Cuz i think the Persian version sounds much better than the English one lol
So yeah...someone pls correct it :))
Thnx <3
"Winter"
The sky says goodbye to the darkness of the night and hugs the morning with its loving arms.
Snowflakes make a carpet on the Earth, this deep sleep of trees make a mysterious silence at the atmosphere.
Everybody is looking for a change, a revolution, a new season! Yet, no one knows what to do. Of course, life gets tough at times. Especially in winters. This hard and sad situation has made a white hair for the trees. It has made them dream about those good old days, the days when they were young and fresh and green. They are dreaming about their youth when life was full of flower's laughter and not the wilting's cry.
The Earth and the sky are the same color now and the early birds have calmly leaned against the tree's cold body. It is not about the coldness! In fact, observing this beautiful and splendid scene from this view gives everyone's body a shiver!
Even the winter's love is different. Not a single warm hug, not even a long lasting kiss. Not even a heartwarming touch that reminds you of cozy days with no difficulties. This kind of love informs you of hardships in life and challenging moments. This love makes us stronger and more patient. As an old saying goes, "good things come to those who wait". You should know that there is going to be a spring after all of this.
In this boring, cold, white world there is no home for red, green and yellow. As if the painter of this world has left the canvas white and lost his painting-brush somewhere.
But now, the time has come for him to start his art once again. So he gently paints a shiny sun which happened to be the nature's heart. And with every heartbeat, the heat melts the snow of hardships.
And once again, flowers are smiling, Eventually .
"The End"
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