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Writing practice-about career
Recently, I have been very annoyed about the choice of my career. My major in university is not something I'm really interested in. I chose it because it's very popular and very easy to find a job. After working in this career for a month, i realized that this kind of job is not suitable for me, so I decided to find a new job. But it's very hard to find a job not relevant to my major and I don't know which job is the most suitable job for me.Note:
Your essay would be better if you specified your career choice and the job that you took
distinguishing "job" and "career";
A 'job' is just something you do to get money to live on.
When he was in high school, he had a part-time job at a fast-food restaurant.
A 'career' is a profession for which you have had training or education (a career in law, medicine, teaching,)
My sister decided on a career in nursing.
A 'profession' is also a job for which you need training. This is used often to talk all the people in the profession
The legal profession
The medical profession
The medical profession is still divided about the main cause of heart attacks. (from Longman dictionary https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/profession )
Which words can replace "suitable"?
In your context, you can say, "the best" , "the right"
I don't know what the best job for me
I don't know what the right job for me is.
you can also use these words with "career"
I don't know if this is the right career for me.
I don't think this is the best career for me.
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