An email: A school friend
I'm going to write an exercise email for my (imaginary) friend. A friend of mine, Cristina, had an accident last week. Now, her doctor says she must stay at home for two weeks.
I'm going to write an email to Cristina. An email includes:
・tell her I'm sorry about her problem
・say what I can do to help her
・say when I can visit her.
___
Dear Cristina,
I heard you had an accident last week and needed to stay home for two weeks.
I’m really sorry to hear that an accident you had been.
If you want to talk to someone or need something to kill time, I can visit and bring books or DVDs.
If you don’t mind, I want to visit you. If it’s OK, tell me the time and day when I can come to you.
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An email: A school friend
I'm going to write an exercise email for my (imaginary) friend as an exercise. A friend of mine, Cristina, had an accident last week. Now, her doctor says she must stay at home for two weeks.I'm going to write an email to Cristina. An The email should include s:
・tell her I'm sorry about her problem
・say what I can do to help her
・say when I can visit her.
___
Dear Cristina,
I heard you had an accident last week and needed to stay at home for two weeks.
I am really sorry to hear that an accident you had been about your misfortune.
If you want to talk to someone or need something to kill time pass the time while you recover, I can visit and bring books or DVDs.
If you don’t mind, I want to visit you. If it’s OK, you are fine with me visiting, please let me know tell me the time and day that is convenient to you. when I can come to you.
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An email: A school friend
I'm going to write an exercise email for my (imaginary) friend. A friend of mine, Cristina, had an accident last week. Now, her doctor says she must stay at home for two weeks.I'm going to write an email to Cristina. An email includes:
・tell her I'm sorry about her problem
・say what I can do to help her
・say when I can visit her.
___
Dear Cristina,
I heard that you had an accident last week and needed to stay home for two weeks.
I’m really sorry to hear that an accident you had been. that you had been in an accident.
If you want to talk to someone or need something to kill time, I can visit and bring books or DVDs.
If you don’t mind, I want to visit you. If it’s OK, tell me the time and day when I can come to you.
Over all, good entry! Just a small word reordering on the second line.
Hope it helps! :-)
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