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When we were growing up, not everything was beautiful.For me, my athlete is very poor, since I study elementary school. However, when I study junior high school, our teacher ordered everyone must to attend race. She hoped that we can earn the honor for class. So I participated into 200 meter. When we warm-up, all of the opponents discussed how much time they need to finish the mission.Afterward, I knew I was one of the worse competitors when the gun launched. I tried my best to run to finish line. Unfortunately, I fall down in carving in the important point. What's worse, a lot of people stranger. I was disappointed. My best friend comforted me and accompanied with me. Although I lose the race, I knew someone love me.
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When we were growing up, not everything was beautiful .For me, my athlete is very poor, since I was studying in elementary school. However, when I was studying in junior high school, our teacher ordered everyone must to attend race. She hoped that we can earn the honor for class. So I participated into 200 meter. When we warmed-up/warming-up , all of the opponents discussed how much time they need to finish the mission.Afterward, I knew that I was one of the worse competitors when the gun was fired . I tried my best to run to finish line. Unfortunately, I fall down in carving in the important point. What's worse, a lot of people stranger. I was disappointed. My best friend comforted me and accompanied with me. Although I had lost the race but I knew that someone love me.
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