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I would like you correct my self introduction. Please look at this.
I'm Tomomi. I was born and raised in Nagasaki Japan. Nagasaki is in western Japan. I worked at a nursery school as a nursery school teacher. It requires a national qualification because
that the job has important responsibilities.
Why I want to learn English, because the English teaching in Japan is gradually changing recently. I want to learn English because English teaching in Japan has been gradually changing recently. The
teaching English way English is taught at school in Japan is not practical
for learning and it's
even boring
even now.
So, I thought I was thinking about how I want even small children
will to be interested in English. I want to tell them that English is interesting.
Another reason is that I like traveling and watching movies, especially Disney movies. If I understand English, I will be able to enjoy them more than I do now. That's why I want to learn English. Thank you.
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I'
m Tomomi. I was born and raised in Nagasaki Japan. Nagasaki is in western
Japan. I worked at a nursery school as a nursery school teacher. It
requires a national qualification because the job has important responsibilities. I want to learn English because English teaching in Japan has been gradually changing recently. The way English is taught at school in Japan is not practical for learning and it's even boring now. I was thinking about how I want even small children to be interested in English. I want to tell them that English is interesting.
Another reason is that I like traveling and watching movies, especially Disney movies. If I understand English, I will be able to enjoy them more than I do now. That's why I want to learn English. Thank you.
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I hope this was helpful! Overall good English phrasing. Good luck continuing to learn!
これは役に立つことを望みます。良い英語のフレージングですね！勉強していることを頑張って！
