English Day 21
Today I had a busy day. I've read a few articles on the History of the USSR before the Second World War. I got positive emotions, because the USSR was really successful at that time. I enjoyed reading the government's manifests. They were written in a kind of literary, but clear way. Unfortunately, that success led to the dizziness with success and to deterioration in living standards of the workers. . [Yet, I feel proud of the country, because it was a great step forward.]
After reading that I went out with my friend. It was a cloudy, but warm day. We just played cards and talked. Then I came back home and had a German lesson. Thank goodness, not for three hours this time! I think at such a pace I'll start speaking German in a month or two or tomorrow. Yet I think German grammar is complicated.
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English Day 21
Today I had a busy day. I've read a few articles on the History of the USSR before the Second World War. I got positive emotions, because the USSR was really successful in at that time. I enjoyed reading the government's manifests. They were written in a kind of literary, but clear way. Unfortunately, that success had led to the dizziness with success and to the deteriorating in living standards of the workers. Yet it feels so high ['high' doesn't work here. Do you mean it makes you feel high? If so I would use a synonym, maybe intoxicating or distinguished but you'd need to rework the sentence for either of those.] if you know history.After reading that I went out with my friend. It was a cloudy, but warm day. We just played cards and talked. Then I came back home and had a lesson of German German lesson. Thanks goodness, this time not it wasn't for three hours this time! I think in such a at this pace I'll start speaking German in a month or two, or tomorrow. Yet I think the German grammar is complicated.
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English Day 21
Today I had a busy day. I've read a few articles on the History of the USSR before the Second World War. I got positive emotions, because the USSR was really successful in that time. I enjoyed reading the government's manifests. They were written in a kind of literary, but clear way. Unfortunately, that success had led to the dizziness with success and to the deterioration in living standards of the workers. Yet it feels so high (what do you mean here by 'high'?) if you know history.After reading that I went out with my friend. It was a cloudy, but warm day. We just played cards and talked. Then I came back home and had a lesson of German. German lesson. Thanks thank goodness, this time not for three hours! I think in at such a pace I'll start speaking German in a month or two or tomorrow. Yet I think the German grammar is complicated.
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