Could you correct my writing, please
Just after the landing (I didn't have to wait for the luggage, I had been travelling with a small backpack) I quickly catch a train to Cambridge – there was a ticket on my phone. 30 min in train – and I was in Cambridge. I was going to the city center, but suddenly I saw The Cambridge University Botanic Garden. 6 pounds minus from my wallet – and I enjoyed the silence in this beautiful park, full of nature's delights.
In November, the garden was not in its full magnificence, but even in this time of year, it was great to walk along winding paths in between the various plant beds and trees. Lavender was almost dried on the root. The autumn crocus makes an appearance where I least expect it. The temperature was about +10. Here most of the people go home and set on a sofa in a warm scarf. Not in Cambridge! Many people of all ages were sitting outside, and one girl without any scarf and in light boots was even working on her laptop for an hour as a minimum what I spent here in the garden for at least an hour while I was in the garden
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Could you correct my writing, please
Just after landing (I didn't have to wait for the luggage, I boarded with a small backpack) I quickly caught a train to Cambridge – there was a ticket on my phone. After a 30 minute train ride I was in Cambridge. I was going to the city center, but suddenly I saw the Cambridge University Botanic Garden. It cost 6 pounds to enjoy the silence in this beautiful park, full of nature's delights. It was November, and the garden was not in its full magnificence, but even in this time of year it was great to walk along winding paths in between the various plants and trees. Lavender was almost dried on the root. The autumn crocus made an appearance where I least expected it. The temperature was about 10 degrees. Where I am from most people would go home and sit on a sofa in a warm scarf. Not in Cambridge! Many people of all ages were sitting outside, and one girl without any scarf and in light boots was even working on her laptop for at least an hour while I was in the gardenWant to progress faster?
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