Hi there, could you please help to correct paragraph below? thank you in advance!
I am a grumpy man, perhaps but with my years experience, I am getting quite good at looking after materials. My manager is very happy with my work although he never has told me that. For instance, Once he asked warehouse and administration teams to do a performance rating by oneself. I got 3.8 per 5.0. After he discussed with management team, they gave me 4.43. This is an excellent rating. When I submitted a leave job application, they agreed and gave me three weeks off to travel, and I could back to work. But I refused, I left job and traveled Europe two months ago. I am unemployment now. Near day, he still sent SMS to ask me came back company. Of course I did not go back, I want to find a new job, new company to challenges myself.
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I am a grumpy man perhaps, but with my years of experience, I am getting quite good at looking after materials. My manager is very happy with my work, although he never has never told me that. For instance, once he asked the warehouse and administration teams to rate my job performance. do a performance rating by oneself. I got 3.8/5 per 5.0. After a discussion he discussed with the management team, they gave me a 4.43. This is an excellent rating. When I submitted a job resignation leave job application, they attempted to retain me by offering three weeks paid time off. agreed and gave me three weeks off to travel, and I could back to work. But I refused, left my job I left job and traveled Europe two months ago. I am currently unemployed. unemployment now. Even today Near day, he still requests that I return to the company. sent SMS to ask me came back company. Of course I did not go back; I want to find a new job, a new company to challenges myself.
Good luck on your job search!
Good luck on your job search!
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I am a grumpy man, perhaps but with many years of experience, I am getting quite good at looking after materials. My manager is very happy with my work although he never has told me that. For instance, once he asked warehouse and administration teams to do a performance rating by oneself. I got 3.8 out of 5.0. After he discussed with management team, they gave me 4.43. This is an excellent rating. When I submitted a leave request, they agreed and gave me three weeks off to travel, and I could back to work. But I refused, I left my job and traveled Europe two months ago. I am unemployment now. Recently, he has still sent SMS to ask me to came back company. Of course I did not go back, I want to find a new job, new company to challenges myself.
-> with my limited level of English, that is what i can do for you. Good luck to you.
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