A souvenir from Kyoto
My mum gave me sweet snackes called Yatsuhashi. It's a famous souvenir from Kyoto.
To tell the truth, I didn't really like it when I was a child because I hated the flavor. X( I remember clearly that a friend of mine quite often gave me it, and I didn't know what to do.haha
But I tried it the other day, it was so delicious!! On top of that, I'm really into it lately since I had it, and I've definitely get it when I see it at a supermarket in my town by chance.haha
I wonder if my taste have changed.
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A souvenir from Kyoto
My mum gave me sweet snackes called Yatsuhashi. It's a famous souvenir from Kyoto.To tell you the truth, I didn't really like it them when I was a child because I hated the flavor. X( I remember clearly that a friend of mine, quite often, gave it to me, and I didn't know what to do. haha
But I tried them again the other day. It was so delicious!! On top of that, I'm really into it lately since I had it, and I'llve definitely get it when I see it at a supermarket in my town by chance.haha
I wonder if my taste (has)have changed.
(This is my first correction here on italki. English is not my native language but seeing that no one gave their corrections i decided to try. If i made a mistake others can give their "native powered" corrections :) )
By the way, i decided to make "snacks" in to snack just because later through out the text you refer to snack as "it" which in case of snacks would have to be changed to them for plural.
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Thank you for the comment. If you have a chance, please try it. :)
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I didn't know about this.It looks nice.I love Japanese culture.
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