Problems with my new car
Last summer I was looking for a new car for one month, as my car was giving me too many problems which made me to spend a lot of money. Finally I managed to find a car that fitted me in August and I bought it. This car is an Honda Civic, a car with a special and different design compare to others in the same sector.
Up to last month, I didn't have any problem but this last month has been very disappointing because I had to go to the workshop many times to fix some problems related to the sensors, noises and so on. Today I have received a bad new because the repairman wasn't able to fix a major problem with the front sensor which randomly rings, although the car is far away from an obstacle, when it is raining. The workshop doesn't know what really happens and so I'm so worried.
Thanks in advance for your correction. Help me as much as possible.
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Problems with my new car
Last summer I spent a month looking for a new car, since my current car was giving me too many problems that cost me a lot of money. I finally managed to find a car that fitted me in August, and I bought it. It's a Honda Civic, a car with a [special and different design]* compared to others in the same sector.I didn't have any problems until last month, but this last month has been very disappointing. I had to go to the mechanic many times to fix some problems related to the sensors -- noises, and so on. Today I had some bad news because the mechanic wasn't able to fix a major problem with the front sensor -- when it's raining, it randomly goes off even though the car is far away from an obstacle. The mechanic doesn't know what is causing this, so I'm so worried.
Thanks in advance for your correction. Help me as much as possible.
*I don't understand this phrase.
Note: U.S. English
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Problems with my new car
Last summer I was looking for a new car for one month as my present car at the time was giving me too many problems which meant I had made me to spend a lot of money. Finally Eventually, I managed to find a car that fitted suited me in August and I bought it. This car is an Honda Civic, a car with a special and different design compared to others in the same class sector.Up until to last month, I didn't have/hadn't had any problems but this last month has been very disappointing because I had to go to the workshop/garage many times to have fix some problems fixed related to the sensors, noises and so on. Today I have received a bad news because the repairman/mechanic wasn't able to fix a major problem with the front sensor which randomly rings when it is raining, although the car is far away from any obstacle, when it is raining. The workshop doesn't know what the problem/issue is really happens and so I'm so worried.
Thanks in advance for your correction. Help me as much as possible.
Great work! The corrections I made are just pushing it that little closer to native level. The words in BOLD are alternative, more suitable words for the context. Hope that helps.
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