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I saw some bones in the dry river bank. When I got close I realized that they were dinosaur fossils! I wonder if there are new Jurassic Park films in the works.
In my work, all we were on the same page about start thinking outside the box. That includes the people who were brought on board recently and we didn't have time to touch base with them yet. With this decision we don't expect an overnight success but we could pad the situation of the company. We are getting rid of our old ideas.
That sounds completely improvable to me. Drop outing from my degree wouldn't report me any benefits. I am reluctant about that.
Political parties adherents tend to suffer from nepotism. They have to pay off favors and bribes. Not recommendable and hypocritical people. They always get away with everything they do. Don't get on with them anymore. You should cut off with all them. It doesn't matter if you double-cross them to be free. I'm telling you the truth, I am not getting at them.
Pay off your debts or I will laid bare everything to the newspapers to undermine you.
My commute takes me one hour.
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In my work, we were all all we were on the same page about starting to think start thinking outside the box. That included includes the people who were brought on board recently and we didn't have time to touch base with them yet. With this decision we don't expect an overnight success but we could improve pad the situation of the company. We are getting rid of our old ideas.
That sounds completely improvable to me. Dropping out Drop outing from my degree wouldn't benefit me any report me any benefits. I am reluctant about that. (this sentence is unclear-- what are you referring to?)
Political parties adherents tend to suffer from nepotism (this doesn't seem like the right word. Nepotism means that they get benefits, favors or jobs because of family or personal ties, and might not apply to this situation). They have to repay pay off favors and bribes. They are Not recommendable and hypocritical people. They always get away with everything they do. I Don't get on with them anymore. You should cut off all ties with with all them. It doesn't matter if you double-cross them to be free . I'm telling you the truth, I am not getting at them. (I am not sure what you are trying to say with these last two sentences.)
Pay off your debts or I will lay laid bare everything to the newspapers to undermine you.
My commute takes me one hour.
Very good work with these sentences and paragraphs! You have a good grasp of English so far, and I commend you for using such varied language, including some idioms. Some of the sentences, I was unsure of how to correct, because it would be different depending on what you were trying to say.
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