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my personal essay to NYU (please give me as many corrections as you can!!) Every time I went to the bakery would I found a donation box by the checkout counter. It always was an easily overlooked glass box wherein a few customers putting coins. “The box is too common to appeal contributions.” I thought, bewildered. Several years later,when I heard the topic of works is the ‘donation box’ in Tongji University Summer Camp, I recalled the bakery, the donation box and the sparse coins. I decided to make a difference, to redefine the donation box, to change the serious stereotype of charity. Why must the donation box only has one feature? What design can engage people in doing charity more? These questions were like bubbles buzzing around in my head. I had a heated discussion with my partner Max, who was a typical ‘science geek’. Snice he thought my conceptions were all too unrealistic and I complained about his prim and proper thoughts, we couldn’t reach an agreement. The discussion came to a deadlock, with both of us refusing to compromise. Out of sheer boredom I picked up my phone, tipping into online news. Suddenly, I was attracted by the foreign news about the story vending machine located in France. The aim was to kill time or boredom, offering a relaxing and comfortable environment for passengers waiting for trains. At that moment, a wonderful idea came into my mind: why couldn’t we design a donation box which can also vend stories? I prompted to share my thought with Max and fortunately, he considered it as a fantastic idea too. With the basic design ---putting into a coin and receiving a piece of paper with story or appreciation, we began to speculate about the specific operating system. It occurred to me that photoconductive resistance, sensing the coins, could be used to run the process of vending story paper. To tell the truth, it wasn’t a piece of cake for me to turn seemingly easily theory to practice since I was better at arts than science. Thanks to my partner Max who was obviously command programming well, the procedure was successfully accomplished. We chiseled a hole in the box, putting a laser light device on the other side of the box. If someone put a coin into the box, the photoconductive resistance wouldn’t sense the laser light and then it will drive the electric motor to turn its stick, making the scroll out of the box.

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the second part of my essay After complete the work, we brought our newly made donation box to the Tongji subway station. The novel donation box immediately appealed a throng of pedestrians to stop. We proudly introduce our work to onlookers and they readily took a try to experience an unprecedented way of charity. During the 2 hour exhibition at the station, 46 coins were eventually received and we donate them to the Sandu school of the Shui nationality in the Guizhou province. The professor in Media Department from Tongji University gave praise in our work and said that he hoped someday it would be used in our society. Max and I both felt excited, not only for our successful corporation, but also for the change we bring to the traditional charity. It’s undoubtedly an unforgettable experience that makes me what I am today—a girl who love challenges, believe in the team work and want to do something small to bring about good changes. Before the summer camp, I always had a stereotype that innovation only can be made by scientists. But now I’ve changed my mind. Though science principles are a closed book to me, though I may have never touched the new subject, I won’t be afraid to put my minds into practice. In the course of my life, millions of problems or inspiration will emerge. And when they happen, I will embrace the changes instead of turning away from them.

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