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plans for my graduation trip Graduation is in sight and it’s time to bade farewell to our friends. To mark this highlight in life, I’d like to design a 2-day trip to Jinzhai in Anhui province. It isn’t a whim of choosing this seemingly nondescript place to travel to. On the contrary, I selected it with careful deliberation since we’ve been to Jinzhai for social investigations before and it will make us recall these memories. On the first day, I arrange places of historical interests and local sights for visiting. Jinzhai is an attractive city with a long history but we haven’t enjoyed all of her beauty due to busy investigation before. Walking along the muddy and winding paths, toping the peak of Dabie Mountain, looking back history in the museum…… I believe they’ll remind me of our lost youth some day in the future. On the second day, I plan to organize classmates to pay a visit to farmers they had investigate for. After the end of social investigation, the memory of rural area were still fresh in our mind. So it’s a good chance to return to the place, chatting with farmers again, caring for their living circumstances . It will be a fruitful experience to get in touch with farmers, to understand poor-supporting policies, to appreciate spectacular nature scenes. This chapter in the book of our travel will remain among our most treasured memories.

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Graduation is in sight and it’s time to bade bid farewell to our friends. To mark this highlight in life, I’d like to design plan a 2-day trip to Jinzhai in the Anhui province. It isn’t on a whim of that we are choosing this seemingly nondescript place to travel to. On the contrary, I selected it with careful deliberation since because we’ve been to Jinzhai for social investigations events before and it will make us recall these those memories. On the first day, I arranged for us to visit places of historical interests interest and local sights for visiting. Jinzhai is an attractive city with a long history, but we haven’t been able to enjoyed all of her its beauty due to busy investigation plans before. We will Walking along the muddy and winding paths, and toping the peak of Dabie Mountain, and looking back at history in the museum…… I believe they’ll it will remind me of our my lost youth some day in the future. On the second day, I plan to organize for my classmates to pay a visit to farmers я не понимаю что вы имеете в виду здесь

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