How should I deal with my mess hair.
I was born with thin hair,and it's not black enough for a chinese girl. Every time when I saw someone with a thick, straight hair passing by, it would make me envy her so much.I have tried to have my hair strighend or make it curl, but it turned out to be a total disaster almost everytime.Besides, the device and chemical stuff which was used on my hair kind of worsen my hair qulity. My hair is too weak to go through any torment.So I have to tie my hair up when I am outside.But in this way, I can't have the pleasing feeling which carried by the breeze when it blowed my hair up.I can't enjoy it now because each time I put my hair down, my friend would call me "messy girl".Anyhow, I've bought a strightening brush recently, hope it will help me out.
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How should I deal with my messy hair.
I was born with thin hair, and it's not black enough for a Chinese girl. Every time I see a girl with a thick, straight hair passing by, it makes me envy her so much. I have tried to have my hair straightened or curled before, but it turned out to be a total disaster almost every time. Besides, the device and chemical substances which were used on my hair kind of worsened my hair quality. My hair is too weak to go through any more torment. So I have to tie my hair up when I am outside. But in this way, I can't have the pleasant feeling when my hair gets lifted up by the breeze whenever it blows my hair up. I can't enjoy it now because every time I put my hair down, my friend would call me "messy girl". Anyhow, I've bought a straightening brush recently. I hope it will help me out!1
How should I deal with my mess hair.
I was born with thin hair, and it's not black enough for a Chinese girl. Each time when I saw someone* with thick straight hair passing by, it would make me envy her so much. I have tried to have my hair straightened or make it curl**, but it turned out to be a total disaster almost every time. Besides, the devices and chemical stuff which were used on my hair kind of worsened my hair qulity. My hair is too weak to go through any torment. So I have to tie my hair up when I am outside. But in this way, I can't have the pleasing feeling of the breeze blowing through my hair. by the breeze when it blowed my hair up. I can't enjoy that because each time I put my hair down, my friend would calls me "messy girl". Anyhow, I've bought a strightening brush recently, and hope it will help me out.suggestions:
Each time when I saw someone* with thick straight hair passing by, it would make me envy her so much.
Better: Whever I saw someone
have my hair straightened or make it curl**,
better: Have it straightened or curled (someone else is doing the curling) OR have it straightened or try to curl it (you were trying to curl it)
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How should I deal with my mess hair.
I was born with thin hair ,and it's not black enough for a Chinese girl. Every time when I saw someone with a thick, straight hair passing by, I would envy her so much. I have tried to have my hair straightened or curled, but it turned out to be a total disaster almost every time. Besides, the devices and chemical stuff which was used on my hair kind of worsened my hair quality. My hair is too fragile to go through any treatments. So I have to tie my hair up when I am outside. But I can't enjoy the wind blowing through my hair like that. I can't enjoy it now because whenever I put my hair down, my friends call me "messy girl". Anyhow, I bought a straightening brush recently, and I hope it will help me out.Want to progress faster?
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