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My daily routines Everyday I follow with the same routines. I'm going to tell you what I do when I start the day. First of all I have a Golden Retriever. She is my dog and is called Mia then in my routines are joined with my dog's routines. Why? Because she has to go out more less three times to day. I wake up at seven o'clock but I get up at eight o'clock. About one hour I have my breakfast and reading the newspaper online. About at night I tidy away my room, I make the bed, open the window to air the room. I have a shower and I put on my clothes. I comb my hair and I brush my teeth. When I am prepared, then my dog and I go for a walk. We go to the park is in front of my house. There is a big park with a river where there ducks and other birds. We are walking near one and half hour. My dog loves this park, she loves swimming in the river. After the walking when we go back at home then I have to wash my dog because she arrives at home mud cover. When she goes out of house her colour is golden but when she goes back at homer then her colour is dark brown. I don't mind this is part of my routines.

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My daily routines

Everyday I follow with the same routines. I'm going to tell you what I do when I start the day.

First of all I have a Golden Retriever. She is my dog and is called Mia so my routines are joined with my dog's routines. Why? Because she has to go out more or less three times a day.

I wake up at seven o'clock but I get up at eight o'clock. After about one hour I have my breakfast and read the newspaper online.
About at nightat night?? I tidy  my room, I make the bed, open the window to air the room.

I have a shower and I put on my clothes. I comb my hair and I brush my teeth.

When I am prepared, then my dog and I go for a walk. We go to the park  in front of my house. There is a big park with a river where there are ducks and other birds. We  walkfor about  one and half hours. My dog loves this park, she loves swimming in the river.

After the walk when we go back home then I have to wash my dog because she gets home she is covered in mud. When she goes out of house her colour is golden but when she gets back  home then her colour is dark brown. I don't mind this is part of my routines.
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My daily routines

Every day I follow the same routine. I'm going to tell you what I do when I start the day.

First of all, I have a Golden Retriever called Mia and my routines involve her a lot. Why? Because she has to go out more or less three times a day.

I wake up at seven o'clock but I get up an hour later, then I usually spend about an hour having breakfast and reading the newspaper online. When I'm done with my breakfast, I tidy up my room, I make the bed and open the window to air the room. After that, I have a shower, put my clothes on, comb my hair and brush my teeth. All of that done, Mia and I go for a walk. We usually head to the park in front of my house where there are ducks and other birds. My dog loves this park, she loves swimming in the river. After the walk, we go back home and I have to wash my dog as she always gets herself covered in mud: when we leave the house, her coat is golden yellow, but when we return, it's dark brown. But I don't mind it because it's part of my routine.

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Everyday I follow with the same routines. I'm going to tell you what I do when I start the day.

First of all I have a Golden Retriever. My dog is called Mia and my routines are joined with my dog's routines. Why? Because she has to go out more or less three times a day.

I wake up at seven o'clock but I get up at eight o'clock. For about one hour I have my breakfast and read the newspaper online.
I tidy my room after the night before, make the bed and open the window to air the room.

I have a shower and I put on my clothes. I comb my hair and I brush my teeth.

When I am prepared, then my dog and I go for a walk. We go to the park that is in front of my house. There is a big park with a river where there are ducks and other birds. We walk for one and half hours. My dog loves this park. She loves swimming in the river.

After the walk we go back home. Then I have to wash my dog because she arrives home covered in mud.When she goes out of house her colour is golden but when she comes back home, her colour is dark brown. I don't mind as this is part of my routine.
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try to avoid repeating yourself too much and use conjunctions, you don't have to write every single sentence separately

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