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Day1: 30 days language challenge Who am I? who am I? and what is my purpose in life?

I remember those terrible and sad days that I passed through and made me another person. After every tragic situation happening to me I ask myself these two questions which changed my life gradually.

‏In the past, I spend most of my time interested in my relationships with people and neglected myself a lot. I did not know who I am, what I want and what my dreams are!

But after long meditation and deep reading, I found myself and my value in this vast universe. Little by little, I stayed away from the people and I don’t expect anything from them.

‏In the past, If anyone threw bad or cruel words at me, I cared a lot and respond to them. Now, I only care about myself and I smile in the middle of the battle.

‏I became a very different person from what I was. Now, I live to please myself and people close to me.

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who am I? and what is my purpose in life?

I remember those terrible and sad days that I passed through and made me another person. After every tragic situation happening to me I ask myself these two questions which changed my life gradually.

‏In the past, I spend most of my time interested in my relationships with people and neglected myself a lot. I did not know who am I, what I want and what my dreams are!

But after long meditation and deep reading, I found myself and my value in this vast universe. Little by little, I stayed away from the people and I don’t expect anything from them.

‏In the past, If anyone threw bad or cruel words at me, I cared a lot and respond to them. Now, I only care about myself and I smile in the middle of the battle.

‏I became a very different person from what I was. Now, I live to please myself and people close to me

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Day1: 30 days language challenge Who am I?

who am I? and what is my life purpose?

I remember those terrible and sad days that I passed through , and that made me to  become quite another person. After every tragic situation happening to me, I end up with asking  myself these two questions : who am I ? and what is my life purpose ? , that changed my life gradually.( we use which with singular only)

‏In the past, I spent( to spend is an irregular verb spend-spent-spent) most of my time interested in the relationship between  people  and me . I used to neglect myself a lot. I did not know who I was, what I wanted , and what my dreams were!( if you start a sentence with the past tense , then you must finish it with the past tense too ) But after having  long meditation and deep reading, I found myself and my value in this vast universe. Little by little  I started to stay away from rude people(you can't stay away from every person , it's impossible , you just can avoid rude people , that's it ) , and I don't  expect anything from them (this sentence makes no sense ) . In the  past, If anyone threw bad or cruel words at me, I could never tolerate it , and talked  always back . Now These days I smile during the battles and I don't even take them seriously 

‏Now I vary from the person I was in the past. Now, I enjoy  to please myself and  the people , that are valuable for me.

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Life is not about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself. ---George Bernard Shaw. I like your story, hajer. Let's enjoy "30 days Challenge"!
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I read it twice and found it great article but there are little thing I think you forgot it by mistake hope you found it by your self My greetings

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