What happend today
Today is a sunny day.I went to the library by bike.Because the exam is coming soon.As the exam approaches,I was anxious and didn't know how to release my emotion.Fortunately,I have the idols of worship.They are the music group frim Siuth Korea.Their music not only bring me happiness but also enables me to have the courage ti face anything of hardship.Their music tells teenagers not abandon the dream and never give up until the goal is reached.Every time when I felt tired,I would listen to their music and release my stress.I am grateful them extremely and I wish I will succeed one day.
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What happend today
Today is a sunny day. I went to the library by bike because my exam is coming soon. As the exam approaches, I am anxious and don't know how to release my emotions. Fortunately, I have the Idols of Worship. They are a music group from South Korea.Their music not only brings me happiness, but also enables me to have the courage to face any hardship.Their music tells teenagers not abandon the dream and never give up until the goal is reached. Every time when I felt tired, I would listen to their music and release my stress. I am extremely grateful for them extremely and I hope I will succeed one day.Great job! It was nice to hear about your day. After every period and comma, you should put a space.
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