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It was the pouring day, I took the bus to Taipei station. I transfered to MRT. In the bus stop to Taipei station way, I met a old woman sold me a candy I refused to buy it in the begin. I dwell on buying it yes or not, because I couldn't distinguished that the old woman is real or falk. I saw the old woman was rejected by others, so she kept wandering in the rain. Finally, I determined to buying the candy. Let she sell out the candy early and go home relax. If she was one that really needs help, hoping I was bailed her out.
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It was the pouring day raining today, I took the bus to Taipei station. I transfered to MRT. In At the bus stop to Taipei station way, I met a an old woman who sold me a candy, which I refused to buy it in the begin beginning. I dwell on buying it yes or not I dwell on whether or not I should buy it, because I couldn't distinguished that if the old woman is real or falk fake. I saw that the old woman was rejected by others, so she kept wandering in the rain. Finally, I determined decided to buying the candy. Let she sell out the candy early and go home relax. If she was one that really needs help, I hoping hope that I was bailed her out.
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On a rainy day, I took the bus to Taipei station.
I transfered to MRT. At the bus stop to Taipei station way, I met an old woman who tried to sell mea candy that I refused to buy at first. I hesitated, because I couldn't tell if she was a scammer or not. I saw other people turning her away, too, so she kept wandering in the rain. Finally, I decided to buying the candy. Hopefully she will sell out early and go home to relax. If she was someone that really needs help, I hope I helped.
I transfered to MRT. At the bus stop to Taipei station way, I met an old woman who tried to sell me
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Could use some work, especially Grammar. But i was able to get the gist of your article, so you are on the right track my friend..keep working on honing your skills and yupp focus on tense, verb and sentence order all that ...
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