The same blood flows in out body. I traveled to Kusastu,Hot spring resort, with mom. We enjoyed not only normal hot spring, but also "Ashiyu" which is a big bath tub for feet. It's not as deep as usua

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The same blood flows in out body. I traveled to Kusastu,Hot spring resort, with mom. We enjoyed not only normal hot spring, but also "Ashiyu" which is a big bath tub for feet. It's not as deep as usual bath tub. All you have to do is to take off your shoes and socks. Then you can just put your feet into the tub. I like Ashiyu. You don't get dizzy even though you take ashiyu for a long time. In addition, it's on outside so we can enjoy greenery and autumn leaves during fall. My mom and I talked about a lot of thing while taking Ashiyu. She started to talk about her youth. When she was young, she didn't have enough confidence. For example, when she had a relationship, she tended to give up. She was probably afraid of getting hurt or being dumped so she was always the first to dump her boyfriend. She said that she should have had more confidence and waited for her boyfriend to make a decision. This story reminded me of my story. I had relationship with someone I really like in my 20's. Actually we live together. Living together brings about a lot of problem as we grew up in a different environment. Then I wasn't sure if he liked me so I dumped him. But later on it turned out that he still liked me so I just jumped to the conclusion. Now I got over this problem as I regret it so much after the breaking up. I was very much surprised to hear my mom's story. It probably flows the same blood in our body.

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The same blood flows in our body.

I traveled to Kusastu, a hot spring resort, with my mom.
We enjoyed not only the normal hot spring but also "Ashiyu" which is a big bathtub for (dipping) feet. It's not as deep as a usual bathtub. All you have to do is to take off your shoes and socks, then you can just put your feet into the tub. I like Ashiyu. You don't get dizzy even though you take Ashiyu for a long time. In addition, it's on outside so we can could enjoy greenery and autumn leaves during fall.

My mom and I talked about a lot of things while taking Ashiyu. She started to talk about her youth. When she was young, she didn't have enough confidence. For example, when she had a relationship, she tended to give up. She was probably afraid of getting hurt or being dumped so she was always the first to dump her boyfriend. She said that she should have had more confidence and waited for her boyfriend to make a decision. This story reminded me of my story. I had a relationship with someone I really liked in my 20's. Actually, we lived together. Living together brings brought about a lot of problems as since we grew up in a different environment. Then I wasn't sure if he liked me so I dumped him. But later on, it turned out that he still liked me so I had just jumped to the a conclusion. Now I got over this problem as I regretted it so very much after the breaking up. I was very much surprised to hear my mom's story. It is probably flows that the same blood flows in our body bodies.

This is an interesting read. The biggest issue is the mix up in tenses which you will learn well in due time.

The same blood flows in our body.

I traveled to Kusastu, a hot spring resort, with mom.
We enjoyed not only normal the hot spring, but also "Ashiyu" which is a big bath tub for feet. It's not as deep as the usual/a normal bath tub. All you have to do is to take off your shoes and socks. Then you can just put your feet into the tub. I like Ashiyu. You don't get dizzy even though you take ashiyu for a long time. In addition, it's on outside so we can enjoy the greenery and autumn leaves during autumn/the fall. My mom and I talked about a lot of things while taking Ashiyu. She started to talk about her youth. When she was young, she didn't have enough confidence. For example, when she had a relationship, she tended to give up. She was probably afraid of getting hurt or being dumped/rejected, so she was always the first to dump her boyfriend. She said that she should have had more confidence, and waited for her boyfriend to make a decision. This story reminded me of my own story. I had a relationship with someone I really liked in my 20's. Actually we lived together. Living together brings about a lot of problems as we had grown up in a different environments. Then I wasn't sure if he liked me so I dumped him. But later on it turned out that he still liked me, so I had just jumped to the/that conclusion. Now I have got over this problem, as I regret it the break-up so much after [the breaking up]. I was very much surprised to hear my mom's story. [It probably flows] The same blood flows through our veins [in our body.]* *I don't know quite how to put this in English, although there are equivalent expressions.

I expect a good correction by native speaker.

I tried to correct two sentences, but I expect good corrections by native speakers. (1) When she was young, she didn't have enough confidence. → When ... enough confidence in herself. (2) It probably flows the same blood in our body. → It is probable that the same blood flows in our bodies.

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