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My daughter likes to go out a lot My daughter likes to go out a lot. She is 5 months old now but she does not want to stay at home. Of course, she does not go out by herself, so she asked by crying. When she cried, we will let her go out and she immediately stop crying and start smiling. I usually accompanied her to my neighbors or my friends' house. Sometimes, I took her to go to the park. She prefer to go to park than the houses. I will take her to go to the beach when she is 6 months old because it is windy a lot now.

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My daughter likes to go out a lot

My daughter likes to go out a lot. She is 5 months old now but she does not want to stay at home. Of course, she does not go out by herself, so she asked by crying. When she cried, we will let her go out and she immediately stop crying and start smiling.
I usually accompanied her to my neighbors or my friends' house. Sometimes, I took her to go to the park. She prefer to go to park than the houses.
I will take her to go to the beach when she is 6 months old because it is windy a lot now.


Hi Alyssa,

I would write:-

My daughter likes to go out a lot. She is only 5 months old but she does not want to stay at home. Of course, she cannot go out by herself so she asks by crying. When she cries we take her out and she immediately stops crying and starts smiling.

I usually take her to my neighbours or my friends' house. Sometimes, I take her to the park. She prefers the park to the houses.

I will take her to the beach when she is 6 months old, it is too windy at the moment.

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My daughter likes to go out a lot.

My daughter likes to go out a lot. She is 5 months old and she does not want to stay at home. Of course, she does not go out by herself, so she asks by crying. When she cries, we bring her out and she immediately stops crying and starts smiling.
I usually accompanied her to my neighbors' or my friends' house. Sometimes, I take her to the park. She prefers to go to park more than the houses.
I will take her to go to the beach when she is 6 months old because it is very windy.
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yeah, children are so lovely.
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I think most kids like that. My two kids like be out home too. (My native language is Ukrainian)
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My younger daughter did it too. She was crying at home, and was sleeping out. Don't take my English like an example because my native language is Russian. Good luck!

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