First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Oxana. I am a doctor in a hospital. I am a therapeutist. I have my famely. My famely is my husbend and my son.
I learn english for speaking with my friend and because i want to understand people from other countres.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Oxana. I'm a doctor in a hospital. I am a Therapeutist. I have my family. My family is my husband and my son.

I am learning English because i want to talk with my friends. I am also interested to know people from different/other countries.

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udachi :) :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Oxana. I am a doctor in a hospital. I am a therapeutist. I have a family which includes my husband and my son.
I learn English to speak with a friend and because I want to understand people from other countries.

Good job, Oxana!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Oxana. I am a doctor in a hospital. I am a therapeutist. I have my famely. My famely is my husbant and my sun.
I learn english for speaking with my friend and because i want to understand peoples from other countres.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Oxana. I am a doctor in a hospital. I am a therapeutist. I have my family. My family is my husband and my son.
I learn english for speaking with my friend and because i want to understand people from other countries.