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Perspective and Outlook in the US
Every countries have their own culture and their cultures are different to each other. The US also have their own cultures different from the country I was born. First of all, most of food in the US are made with wheat and corns. Americans eat subs, sandwiches, burgers and fried chicken, Most of Americans also drink coffee too much. Second, when I go to the markets, I see that older people are shopping alone without their family members. That is the main different between my country and the US. In my country, most of the older people don't go outside alone. They always go with their family and they just stay lay in the bed. Third, most of the college students live in the drone while they are attending university and they don't live with their family. My perspective and outlook has change a lot, as I mention since I've arrived to the US. These changes are good because I can learn other culture like American's life style.
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Every country has its own culture, and each country's culture is different. The U.S. also has its own culture, which is different from the culture of the country where I was born. First of all, most food in the U.S. is made from wheat or corn. Americans eat subs, sandwiches, burgers, and fried chicken. Most Americans also drink a lot of coffee. Second, when I go to the market, I see older people shopping alone without their family members. That is the main different between my country and the U.S. In my country, most older people don't go outside alone. They always go with their family, or they just stay at home in bed. Third, most college students live in dorms while they are attending university, and they don't live with their family. My perspective and outlook have changed a lot since I've arrived in the U.S. These changes are good because I can learn about other cultures like the life style in the U.S.
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