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1. He wants to borrow some money at his friends, because he is very hungry and he wants to buy lunch, his wallet is empty, there isn,t even one dollar in it. ( he doesn,t have even one dollar in his wallet.) Being broke is not fun.
2. He isn,t married , he is divorced. He got divorced two years ago. His wife left him, because she didn,t love him anymore. That,s terrible.
3. He says, they need a new mattres, he seems it,s not comfortable, but she thinks it,s fine to her, she doesn,t know what,s wrong with this one. He says, he tosses and turn all night. She says, all right, let,s get a new one.
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1. He wants to borrow some money from his friends because he is very hungry and he wants to buy lunch. His wallet is empty and there isn't even one dollar in it. Being broke is no fun.*2. He isn't married but divorced. He divorced two years ago. His wife left him because she no longer loved him. That's terrible.
3. He says that hey need a new mattress, he finds it uncomfortable, but she thinks it is fine and she doesn't know what's wrong with this one. He says that he tosses and turn all night. She says, all right, let's get a new one.
*Or, being broke is no joke.
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1. He wants to borrow some money at from his friends, because he is very hungry and he wants to buy lunch,. hHis wallet is empty,. there isn,t even one dollar in it. ( hHe doesn,'t have even have one dollar in his wallet.) Being broke is not fun.2. He isn,'t married , he is divorced. He got divorced two years ago. His wife left him, because she didn,'t love him anymore. That,'s terrible.
3. He says, that they need a new mattress,. hHe seems it,s not that the old mattress is no longer comfortable, but she his wife thinks that it,'s fine to for her,. sShe doesn,'t know what,'s wrong with this one that. He says, told her that he tossesd and turned all night. She says, all right, let,s get a new one. His wife agrees and suggests to get a new mattress.
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