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do you love fall? this October makes me crazy, I've never felt such fresh air and peaceful atmosphere, it seems, that nature gives us farewell before falling asleep.
I live in Lugansk, and I almost sure that nobody of you guys doesn't know such city, but it exists:) despite of everything what happens here, I still love my city. there are another wonderful places on Earth , more beautiful, with better atmosphere and with no war, but my place is special. Just because it's dear to my heart.
What about you? do you enjoy weather at your place?
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just wanted to write a bit
Do you love fall? this October makes me crazy, I've never felt such fresh air and peaceful atmosphere, it seems, that nature gives us farewell before falling asleep.I live in Lugansk, and I am almost sure that nobody of you guys knows anything about this city, but it does exist ! despite of everything that happens here, I still love my city. There are other wonderful places on Earth , more beautiful, with better atmosphere and with no war, but my place is special. Just because it's dear to my heart.
What about you? do you enjoy weather at your place?
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Do you love fall? This October makes me crazy. [The phrase "makes me crazy" is usually a negative statement. Dogs make me crazy = I find dogs annoying and aggravating. The phrase "to be crazy about" is a positive statement. I'm crazy about dogs! = I love dogs.] I've never felt such fresh air and peaceful atmosphere. It seems that nature gives us farewell before falling asleep.I live in Lugansk, and I'm almost sure that none of you guys doesn't know such city, but it exists:) [A more natural way to say this is "I'm pretty sure that none of you guys have ever heard of this city, but it exists."] Despite of everything that happens here, I still love my city. There are other wonderful places on Earth , more beautiful, with better atmosphere and with no war, but my place is special. Just because it's dear to my heart.
What about you? Do you enjoy weather at your place?
Hi Tanya! Great job! Don't forget to capitalize the first letter of a new sentence. Your photograph is very beautiful. :)
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Right now, a storm is raging outside in the dark. This is not uncommon in my part of the world during autumn. When I walk in the woods I often pick up things like acorns or pine cones to bring home. Once I took a large bare twisted branch home with me. It's standing in my bedroom reminding me of that special day. I used it a walking stick, but it also supported my soul that was afflicted. Nature is my best friend next to Jesus.
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Hello Tanya, I am interested in Ukraine. I know (more or less) where Lugansk is. I taught French in Nikolaev in 2016. I'll be happy to read your comments on Lugansk. Best wishes from Paris
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