How was your weekend¿ What did you do¿
My weekend was very peaceful and quiet.
My boyfriend worked on Friday night so our Saturday was very relaxed because he was tired.
Moreover, the weather forecast wasn't very pleasing. On Sunday we woke up early and we went to the gym about 1 and half hour. After we ate near of it.
In the afternoon we went to Marbella in the Coast of the Sun for a walking and while we were looking the sunset my mobile phone rang: It was my Mum. She was in my home. So we went back to our house quickly and we had supper all together.
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How was your weekend? What did you do?
My weekend was very peaceful and quiet.My boyfriend worked on Friday night so our Saturday was very relaxed because he was tired.
(Moreover) The weather was also not very good. (Moreover is correct but it is usually used in more formal writing. It would be more natural to use also.)
On Sunday we woke up early and we went to the gym for about one and a half hours. Afterwards we ate nearby of it. In the afternoon we went to Marbella in the Coast of the Sun for a walking and while we were looking at the sunset my (mobile) phone rang: it was my Mum. She was at my house so we went back quickly and we had supper all together.
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Well done, this was a good try.
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