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Correct me , please Hi Clair! Great to hear from you. Guess what- I find a job of my dream. Now I’m working in the most popular magazine in my country. I’m a photo journalist. It’s exciting! Usually I go with group , which consists of journalist and driver, to the places where something had happened. I make photos of peoples, locations, nature. I have to speak a lot with people and I try to open their minds to our readers. I have to be cheerful and outgoing. Also I have to move a lot. It’s very healthy for me! I’m really enjoying the job! And you? What’s about your last journey to Poland? Write back soon! Anyway, that’s all for now! Love, Irena.

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Hi Clair!

Great to hear from you. Guess what- I found the job of my dreams and now I’m working for the most popular magazine in the country, as a photo journalist! It’s really exciting! Usually, I travel with a group that includes a journalist and driver, to places where something happened.

I take photos of peoples , locations and nature. I have to speak to a lot of people and I try to share their thoughts with our readers. I have to be cheerful and outgoing. Also, It keeps me really active so it's very beneficial for me! I’m really enjoying it!

And you? How was your last journey to Poland? Write back soon!

Anyway, that’s all for now!

Love, Irena.

Hi Irena, just a few suggestions for structural changes. Hope this helps :-)

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