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Extrinsic motivation Extrinsic motivation is determined by external attractiveness of the task and impact of external rewards or avoids punishment. For example, the student doesn't like play the piano but parents force him engage in playing music. Over time the child will graduate from music school but he will lost music playing skills very soon because his studying was build on avoiding punishment.

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Extrinsic motivation

Extrinsic motivation is determined by external incentives and rewards or avoidance of punishment. For example, a student who doesn't like to play the piano but whose parents force him to engage in playing music.

Можно "Doesn't like to play the piano" или "Doesn't like playing the piano"


Over time the child will graduate from music school but he will lose music playing skills very soon afterward because his studying was built on avoiding punishment.

Фраза "over time" значит "со временем" (нечто постепенно изменится) или "в течение определенного периода времени". Здесь речь идет о конечном результате. Так может быть лучше сказать просто "Later, the child will graduate.." или "Years later, ..."

Можно тоже "based on"

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