Public health
Some people say the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.(about 350 words)
It’s widely believed that developing public health plays a vital role in the whole society. There is a debate about whether increasing sports facilities or taking other measures is best effective way to improve public health.
Firstly, a few reasons can be found to support increasing facilities. One reason is that it develops people’s physical fitness and leads a healthy lifestyle. This is because there are most of professional gymnast iCal equipments and companions, we can gain a scientific training as well as mutual supervision. To be specific, children can go to swimming pool with their parents or friends in the evening, It will help them shape their body. In addition, we can have resilience and toughness by constantly sporting.
In spite of the above mentioned reasons, it is also possible to see why so many people would rather take other measures. To begin with, by teaching people health knowledge, it can help them to cultivate good personal hygiene including frequent hand-washing. With environmental pollution and food safety are becoming much severer issues today, we need to focus more on our own habits to ensure our health. Therefore, health education is also a good measure to improve public health.
In conclusion, both ways of improving public health offer advantages to people. In my opinion, both are equally important and beneficial. Developing athletic facilities more directly improve the physical fitness, and other measures influences us subliminally.
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Public health
Some people say the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.(about 350 words)It’s widely believed that developing public health plays a vital role in the whole society. There is a debate about whether increasing sports facilities or taking other measures is bestthe most effective way to improve public health.
Firstly, a few reasons can be found to support increasing facilities. One reason is that it develops people’s physical fitness and leads to a healthy lifestyle (OR "promotes a healthy lifestyle"). This is because there are most ofmany professional gymnast iCal equipments and companions. We can gain a scientific training as well as mutual supervision. To be specific, children can go to the swimming pool with their parents or friends in the evening. It will help them shape their body. In addition, we can have resilience and toughness by constantly sporting (more natural to say "by constantly being active).
In spite of the above mentioned reasons, it is also possible to see why so many people would rather take other measures. To begin with, by teaching people about health knowledge, it can help them to cultivate good personal hygiene, including frequent hand-washing. With environmental pollution and food safety are becoming much severer issues today, we need to focus more on our own habits to ensure our health. Therefore, health education is also a good measure to improve public health.
In conclusion, both ways of improving public health offer advantages to people. In my opinion, both are equally important and beneficial. Developing athletic facilities more directly improves the physical fitness, and other measures influences us subliminally.
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