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Essay on art Art is considered as an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts? Art has always been one of the most significant parts of cultures all over the world. In this day and age, people mostly prefer to work in areas related rather to science, technology, and business than to art. In my opinion, the main reason of such a situation is a human fear of incapacity to earn enough money working in the sphere of art. I believe that the aforementioned problem can be solved by increasing salaries to art workers throughout the world. In present, there are much more people working in banks or programming than the ones whose profession is related to art. This is because the sallaries in banks or IT companies are much higher than the ones in the area of art. As far as I know, common art workers have to work on two or even three different jobs to feed their families. For example, I have a friend who is a professional painter but he does not gain enough money for his paintings so he also works as a math tutor. I believe that human beings do not care about the arts because they are not familiar with it. The possible solution of this problem is the launching of compulsory school lessons throughout the world where the history of the arts will be explained in detail. This will lead to familiarity with the history of arts among ordinary people that in turn will make people to be interested in the modern arts. For instance, I have attended classes on the history of arts during my school years. Because of this, I have become a big lover of the modern art. In conclusion, it is not popular to become an art worker nowadays and there is a low amount of people who really like art and care about it. These problems are due to extremely low salaries in the arts sphere and humankind unawareness of the history of arts. These problems can be solved by enlarging the salaries of art workers and to opening classes on the history of the arts in schools.

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Essay on Art    [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words. Do not capitalize a, an, the, in, to, etc. You can use the following web page to paste a title in and see proper capitalization: 'https://capitalizemytitle.com'.] 

Art is considered as an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

Art has always been one of the most significant parts of cultures all over the world. In this day and age, people mostly prefer to work in areas related rather to science, technology, and business than to art. In my opinion, the main reason of such a situation is a human fear of the/an incapacity to earn enough money working in the sphere of art. I believe that the aforementioned problem can be solved by increasing salaries to art workers*** throughout the world.

In present, there are much more people working in banks or programming than the ones whose profession is related to art. This is because the sallaries in banks or IT companies are much higher than the ones in the area of art. As far as I know, common art workers have to work on two or even three different jobs to feed their families. For example, I have a friend who is a professional painter but he does not gain enough money for his paintings so he also works as a math tutor.

I believe that human beings do not care about the arts because they are not familiar with it. The possible solution of this problem is the launching of compulsory school lessons throughout the world where the history of the arts would* be explained in detail. This would lead to familiarity with the history of arts among ordinary people that in turn would make people to be interested** in the modern arts. For instance, I have attended classes on the history of arts during my school years. Because of this, I have become a big lover of modern art.

In conclusion, it is not popular to become an art worker nowadays and there is a low amount of people who really like art and care about it. These problems are due to extremely low salaries in the arts sphere and humankind's unawareness of the history of the arts****. These problems can be solved by enlarging the salaries of art workers and to open classes on the history of the arts in schools.

[* This is a conditional future so "would" is used.

** Less awkward is: "make people interested".

*** More common and less cumbersome is to use "artists" instead of "art workers".

**** Or: "history of art."]

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