The best day of my life. World Cup
(I would be really thankful if you could correct my mistakes:)
The happiest day of my life came about recently. It was July 11, 2018. Everybody knows that the World Cup was held in Russia that summer. I couldn’t miss that competition because I’ve always been keen on football.
I actually saw all of the matches, but the most unforgettable game to me was the one between Croatia and England. I was really nervous to support a team that had been losing until the 68th minute, but luckily, the Croatians scored an equalizer. Everyone around me was delighted.
A referee set extra time. Finally, Mandzukic scored a goal, so Croatia qualified for the final. At that moment I was on top of the world. I said, «This is the best match I’ve ever seen!» My friend told me he had visited many games, but that one was the most interesting and emotional. Moreover, we visited Nikolskaya street, the main place of football fans during World Cup. I really was over the moon that day!
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The best day of my life. The World Cup
The happiest day of my life happened recently.
You could use "came about", but this expression usually refers to some event or some result. Here you are simply talking about a day that you experienced.
The referee set extra time.
There is only one referee, two assistant referees, and a fourth official.
Finally, Mandžukić scored a goal, so Croatia qualified for the final.
I corrected the Croatian name just for fun, normally in English it would be written without accent marks.
My friend told me he had gone to many games, but that one was the most interesting and emotional.
Moreover, we visited Nikolskaya street, the main gathering place of football fans during the World Cup.
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(I would be really thankful grateful if you could correct my mistakes:) The happiest day of my life came about recently. It was July 11, 2018 July 11, 2018 was the happiest day of my life. Everybody knows that the World Cup was held in Russia that this summer. I couldn’t miss that competition it because I’ve always been keen on football. I actually saw all of the matches, but the most unforgettable game to for me was the one between Croatia and England. I was really nervous to support a team that had been losing until the 68th minute, but luckily, the Croatians scored an equalizer. Everyone around me was delighted. A referee set The referee whistled for extra time. Finally, Mandzukic scored a goal, so Croatia qualified for the final. At that moment I was on top of the world. I said, 'this the best match I’ve ever seen'. My friend told me he had visited watched many games, but felt this game was the most interesting and emotional. Following the game we visited Nikolskaya street, the main place for football fans during World Cup. I really was over the moon that day!You write well. Some of the changes I have made are suggested changes and are not compulsory.
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