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Bad behavior! When you are interested by someone, you can do many things to get her. Let's me tell you a little story to explain what I'm saying. When I saw her for the first time, she was the only girl who I'm interested in. I decided to speak with her and as I'm not bad if you know what I mean... that matches between us. So, I took her number and we began to get to know each other, everything was great. I did everything to make her laugh and she liked it. When she wanted that we meet, I always managed to be free. Then, what had to happen, happened. She began to love me, and me, I felt comfortable about it. ( because I already got what I wanted) I began to be less present, I had not the time to meet her anymore, and her smile became occasional. I when to say, why do we take time and energy to get a girl and we do not do more to keep her? That seems weird, right?

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Hi there Lorensy, I tried making some corrections to your post. The phrases in yellow are corrections, and the phrases in blue are more suggestions on what sounds more natural.

Bad behavior!

When you are interested in someone, you will do many things to get her.  Let me tell you a little story to explain what  I mean.

When I saw her for the first time, she was the only girl I was interested in.  I decided to talk to her, and we clicked. So, I got her number and we began to get to know each other, everything was great. I did everything to make her laugh and she liked it. When she wanted to meet up, I always managed to be free. Then, what had to happen, happened. She began to love me, I felt comfortable about it. ( because I already got what I wanted)
I began to be less present, I didn't have the time to meet her anymore, and her smile became occasional.

I mean to say, why do we take time and energy to get a girl and then do not do more to keep her? That seems weird, right?
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Well, not so weird, really. When you say, "I already got what I wanted" you reveal your motive. Apparently you are more interested in a conquest than a lasting relationship. There is a big difference between the two.

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