10/13 Good Job
I have good working companion.
Yesterday, we enjoyed eating pizza and pasta at sports-bar, and we play table tennis.
Then we go to karaoke to sing songs.
It costs money, however it was so happy time.
I thought that there might be sometimes such time.
Today, I work with my companion for four hours.
It is good approach to work with someone, because if I feel loneliness, my motivation for working is dropped.
My plan after now is to cook dinner and do the duties that were left.
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I have a good working companion(coworker/colleague).
Yesterday, we enjoyed eating pizza and pasta at a sports-bar, and we played table tennis.
Then we went to a karaoke (place/parlor) to sing songs.
It costs money, however it was a very happy time.
I thought that there might be sometimes such time.(Don't really understand this)
Today, I worked with my companion for four hours.
It is good approach to work with someone, because if I feel loneliness, my motivation for working is dropped. (this entire part sounds strange, not really sure what you're trying to say)
My planafter now later is to cook dinner and do the duties that were left.
I tried to edit this in a way that still retains the style you wrote it in, but making it sound natural and correcting grammer.
Yesterday, we enjoyed eating pizza and pasta at a sports-bar, and we played table tennis.
Then we went to a karaoke (place/parlor) to sing songs.
It costs money, however it was a very happy time.
I thought that there might be sometimes such time.(Don't really understand this)
Today, I worked with my companion for four hours.
It is good approach to work with someone, because if I feel loneliness, my motivation for working is dropped. (this entire part sounds strange, not really sure what you're trying to say)
My plan
I tried to edit this in a way that still retains the style you wrote it in, but making it sound natural and correcting grammer.
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10/13 Good Job
I have good working companion colleague from work.Yesterday, we enjoyed eating pizza and pasta at a sports-bar, and we played table tennis.
Then we go went to a karaoke place to sing songs.
It costs money, however it was so happy such a fun time.
I thought that there might be sometimes such time. I was hoping I would have this kind of experience when I was working.
Today, I worked with my companion co-worker for four hours.
It is good approach to work with someone, because if I feel loneliness, my motivation for working is dropped.
My plan after now when I get home is to cook dinner and do the duties that were left to do at home.
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